It's a natural impulse. You don't want to exclude anyone. You want as many potential customers as possible walking through the door, so you keep the messaging broad, neutral, and general. Safe enough for everyone.
The problem is that marketing written for everyone tends to resonate with no one.
Why specificity is the point
Strong marketing works because it feels personal. Not personalised in the name-in-the-subject-line sense, but specific enough that the right person reads it and thinks "that's exactly what I need." That feeling of recognition is what stops someone scrolling, clicking away, or moving on to a competitor.
When your message is too broad, it becomes too easy to ignore. There's nothing to grab onto, nothing that feels directly relevant, nothing that makes a particular person feel seen. It washes over people rather than landing with them.
The fear behind broad messaging
Most businesses go broad because narrowing feels risky. If you speak directly to one type of customer, what about everyone else? It feels like leaving money on the table.
But the reality works the other way. The more clearly you define who you help and what problem you solve for them, the easier it becomes for the right customers to find you, trust you, and choose you. You may appear to reach fewer people on paper. In practice, you'll connect with far more of the right ones.
What this looks like in practice
Consider the difference between "we help businesses grow" and "we help independent retailers compete with the big players without a big budget." The second is narrower. It's also significantly more compelling to the person it's written for. They feel as though you understand their world specifically, not businesses in general.
That feeling of being understood is what builds trust quickly. And trust is what converts browsers into buyers.
What to do next
Look at your website or your most recent piece of marketing and ask yourself one question. Is this written for a specific type of person, or is it trying to appeal to everyone? If the answer is the latter, pick one section and rewrite it with a clearly defined customer in mind. Focus on their situation, their problem, and the outcome they're looking for.
Notice how much stronger it becomes when it's written for someone rather than anyone.
“If your marketing could apply to anyone, it usually connects with no one.”
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by Darren Coleshill, 3 minute read

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